A new story idea! the S E V E N

Alright, I wanted to show my new story idea here! Please I really hope you can comment on it so I can seriously start writing on it. What are your views? Should I continue such a story?

Its a science-fiction novel. I have the inspirations from the show Appleseed. Indeed it was a great 3D animated movie. It is worth the money to buy too. If you love action and females as the main lead? This movie is for you!

Anyway, the story is called SEVEN, enjoy the prologue!


S E V E N : Sophisticated Evolutionary Veteran Enforcer Nuero-enhanced
Written by: Caleb

Prologue… Memory file 15…loaded


“GET DOWN!” yelled one of the men. Fien, ducked behind a broken wall and there was a loud explosion. Debri fell everywhere with some stones hitting some parts of his head despite covering it with both hands. But it lessen the damage.
“Move! Flank them!” Fien heard an officer yelled. He recognized the voice to be Sergeant Gillian. Grasping the MK-3000 rifle he had. He jumped over the wall with and opened fire. He ran swiftly, stopping only to hide behind broken trucks and debri as bullets rained down upon him.
Then he heard one of his men shouted from behind.

Fien saw a shadow looming behind him. And the intensity of the shadow tells him that something is coming at him from behind and its fast! Trusting his instincts, he dived forward and the sudden blast near him sent him diving further. He landed on his side and quickly turn to face the shadow. It was a Harbinger. That was what the rebel forces, the Advent, called the humanoid mech. It was a mech that mimics the normal human movements. In other words, it follows the exact human motion within the mech. It was sleek and deadly, and the Marines had a huge number of it.

Fien was not afraid. He immediately took his rifle and fired at the joints of the mech. The Harbinger was smart enough to show its armored side. Fien saw that the Harbinger contained a side minigun and saw the beginnings of its rotation. With quick reflexes, he somersaulted in front of it as it opened fire. He slide between the mech and fired a volley as he did. A splash of blood splattered his face and the Harbinger ceased. Just when he thought he had obtained victory. He looked around and saw that he was totally surrounded. His comrades were all dead, even the sergeant. All the Harbingers pointed their huge versions of their HR-AP-50 rifles. One blow from their 50 rounds and the human body is immediately dismembered. Fien glared at all the Harbingers.

“He managed to defeat a Harbinger. What is he?” One of them spoke, their radio was set to open channel.
“That was just a lucky shot.” One gruff voice said.
“Huh, if you had not watched him you would have immediately disagreed.” Another piped up.
“You were watching?” questioned one. A female voice.
“Hey don’t tell me you’ve forgotten about the Harbinger’s scope abilities.” Said the guy who watched him. He could not just stand there and hear them talk. He was fast enough to let loose a flash bang and the moment he let go the clip he put on his googles. There was a ‘pop’ sound and immediately a very bright light began to shine.
“WAH! Where he go?” Cried the lady.
“SHOOT! SHOOT!” The guy who piped up said.
“WAIT! DON’T SHOOT MORONS! WE ARE TOO CLOSE-“ The gruff voice spoke in alarm, but it was too late. Immediately shots were fired. The moment the flash was gone, only 2 mechs remained.
“Oh my GOD! WE KILLED THE COMMANDER!” One of the soldiers became hysterical.
“Where is that BARSTARD.” The lady was still alive.
“JAN! GET OUT OF YOUR MECH!”
“WH-“

BOOM!

An explosion occurred on the under side of the mech. It was instantly down. The other mech immediately shut down and went offline. The cockpit opened to reveal a soldier inside. He removed his arms from the arm coupling and then, grabbed his rifle by the side of the machine. He came down and was immediately shaking.

Either from fear or from anger, Fien could not comprehend. Yet he was proud of himself from taking down a mech squad all by himself. He approached the pilot from the back. Lifting his knife, he went in for the kill. That was when the pilot turned and immediately fired on him. He felt no pain. Just that he was shocked and surprised. Then he felt a tingling sensation and then, he fell to the ground.